First draft lyrics. I am wondering what you think of it, and if you think it needs tweaking in any area. If you think it sucks.Just say it sucks, plain and simple. don't elaborate please.
Sometimes I just want to fly away.
Away from the pain, away from the hurt.
I can see myself stumbling, through the cold,
fridged night.
Shivering, crying, pleading. For someone to find me.
I walk on still, hurt and scared.
Wanting to get out of this dark place of doubt.
To drop my burden, I ache for my wings.
But like a bird, I am not. And as hard as I try,
I can't escape.
And I can't leave this behind me.
So I wait, begging in the dark.
Hoping for a miracle.
Anything to save me from my past.
Locked up into my soul.
I feel trapped. Alone.
I cry out into the darkness.
And it seems its swallowed my plead.
Why can't anyone hear me?
Because I feel so alone.
Can you feel my pain?
Do you know of my loneliness?
Or does anyone care?
2007-01-13
12:51:49
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Sarissa
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Psychology