I posted a few minutes ago about this topic but i feel I didn’t adequately state what it was I wanted advice about. So here goes: I’m writing a book. I have all these great ideas in my head, but on paper they’re very brief. I expressed worry about the novel not being enough pages, but I really meant that I’m afraid the adventures are too short and are lacking in detail. I’m also a little worried that the story will seem rushed. So, how do I add in those details that make the accounts longer, for the sake of a good read, not page numbers? And how do I transition smoothly from one escapade to the next if there is time in between? Right now it seems as if the characters jump from one day to the next and there are no little actions such as brushing their teeth or whatever, that aren’t necessary to be mentioned. I don’t want to flat-out write “She brushed her teeth,” but I want the reader to know some action may have occurred between waking up and eating breakfast, if that makes any sense..
2007-08-16
17:39:01
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