Do you like them?
Here they are:
You Are Here
By Leah
Age 10
You are here but also up above
You are here saying my name
You are here taunting me, haunting me
You are here saying you love me
Your hand on my shoulder, i know its there
I try to touch you, try to reach out
But all i feel is cold air on my fingers
But you are here
You are here
Heres another one
She
She, her arms glimmering in the moonlight
She, her legs leaping gracefully across the concrete
She, The streetlamps Her spotlight
She, the one you never see in the daytime
She, dancing, in the city jungle
And another
(some of you may not like this one cuse you think i dont know anythhing about relationships and breakups, but, even though you may not beileve it, i have been through both)
The Breakup
I say hi
you say hi
i say why
you say bye
i say bye
then i cry
Thats it tell me what you think!!!!
Ways how i can improve my writing, anything!!
i am an aspiring writer and have written short stories, too!
Thanks!!
2007-02-12
13:29:22
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