I don't think it's anything special... but I want you're opinions on how I could better it.
The feelings swell inside,
And my head fills with haze,
On warm spring days,
When’er I talk with you,
Never telling you the things I hide,
Inside my mind,
Behind these eyes,
Things I want to tell you,
I think we’re friends, maybe more I hope,
I want to ask you sometime,
But now is not that time,
Though soon, I think you shall discover,
What I feel deep inside this cove,
Inside this mind,
And someday I shall tell you,
Just how I feel underneath this cover,
These brown eyes,
My disguise,
And then, you shall know,
How I feel, deep inside this mind
2007-02-14
01:43:48
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3 answers
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