What do you think of this poem?

Question

I don't think it's anything special... but I want you're opinions on how I could better it.

The feelings swell inside,

And my head fills with haze,

On warm spring days,

When’er I talk with you,

Never telling you the things I hide,

Inside my mind,

Behind these eyes,

Things I want to tell you,

I think we’re friends, maybe more I hope,

I want to ask you sometime,

But now is not that time,

Though soon, I think you shall discover,

What I feel deep inside this cove,

Inside this mind,

And someday I shall tell you,

Just how I feel underneath this cover,

These brown eyes,

My disguise,

And then, you shall know,

How I feel, deep inside this mind

Answer 1

Mmm..so touchy. Made me just about cry, save dignity. AWWW! So BEAUTIFUL!!! I'd want something like that on valentine's day.
By the way,
You just made my day.
Happy V-day
<3

Answer 2

This poem is beautiful. You have really done well with it. I am a book author of poetry. I am getting my first book published. I think your poem is wonderful. I don't think you should change a thing. When you write from your heart and soul it is what you wanted the words to feel. A word must give a feeling to one that reads it and it did all it should have. Great job. I wish you would check out my work and tell me what you think. My book should be in print before April. I am so excited. I am also writing another two books. One will be poetry and the other a story. I have been so busy trying to promote my book it is unreal of how little time I have now to do much of anything else. But I love it.

Answer 3

wow i love this poem this is the best poem ever...