Hey Yahoo! Poets!
Today I really had poetic inspiration...I was wondering if this new poem of mine could really bring me to success? I have studied poetic greats and I really think this has potential to be a classic. (My friends love it!) Anyways, it's still a little sketchy, but I really dug into my heart with this one. Tell me what you think!
Lonesome snowman on the tree branch of my heart
Electrocuted on telephone wire
I don't know anything about
Kareoke
Snowflakes but they
aren't Excavated the Pumpkin Seeds
but we are not alone here
is like a little bird
in the Mighty cave
I miss my goats
Anyway, I really tried for imagery on that one. Tell me what you think, I'm anxious to know!!!
2007-07-10
16:24:04
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simon ritchie
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