I wrote a story in first person about a girl name Nicole who was 15 when she was at a party and got drunk and she had sex with a boy named Dimitri. About a few months later she finds out she is pregnant and the day she tells him , she faints and he find out at the hospital because she textedd him on the school bus about it and he told the people at 911 about it. When she wakes up he tells her the baby is fine and he askes her is there anythign he can do for her. She repiles with 'Yes, take care of this baby with me, will be enough.'. Two months later she is in school and gets busted for writing a note in class. Her friend Tianna gave her a gift and her 'big brother' who is also her sister Ashley's boyfriend askes her what's in the box but she wouldnt let him see it, and so he follows her home when she openes it inside is some stuff for the baby. In her fifth month she find out its girl...
Do you like it and what do you think shoudl be added to the story?
2006-12-18
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