Ok, I want to write like Dav Pilkey's The Adventures of Captain Underpants but I write to short. Who can help me get more chapters and more pages. basically, my story is chap 1-intro chap 2-fighting chap 3-end. please help! oh and do you like my this story idea?There were two boys who accidentally knocked a magic necklance that a teacher brought in Chinatown. She kept it in her box. The shopkeeper says that in ancient times. A good king died and people had a ceremony. An woman dropped her necklance into a fire(bonfire) and when she took it out, she became a firegirl(like the human torch) and a person finally defeated her. It is beleived that when the evil king lost the war and died to the good king, the evil king haunted the fire. Til now, the evil and his servant lives in a jungle making this evil necklances and selling it in Chinatown. So, that was the story(as the teacher said) Meanwhile, the necklance floates to the two boys classmate's house . Check additinoal details.
2007-08-16
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