what do u think of this poem i wrote:
As I think of you,
my eyes light up,
and my anger goes away,
I become calm,
and self controled,
all the pain disappears,
and all the sadness goes away,
my life turns up,
and I become happy.
But as you slip away from my mind,
anger whells up inside me,
my fists tighten,
my eyes glare,
I lose control,
and go insane,
my eyes turn blood shot,
and my hands begin to shake,
as my body trembles,
and I become simply nothing.
ITS ALL ONE POEM. WHAT DO U THINK? ON A SCALE FROM 1 TO 10???
sorry if u didn't enjoy it. its my first poem that i made that doesn't ryhme... it was hard. sorry again.
2007-03-17
17:33:53
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