Division of heart
My world, a turmoil of thoughts and emotion,
Your world, an endless stream of stress and commotion,
My world, a bellowing feeling of hate and regret,
Your world, wondering if you'll ever forget,
My world, hoping for a chance of reconstruction,
Your world, so damn tired of all this destruction,
My world, sick as a dog, getting fat as a hog,
Your world, eyes heavy, no sleep, never ready,
My world, hoping shes growing, and maturing,
Your world, pain of the growing never slowing,
Our world, oppritunities closing,
Our world still exists but never showing,
Our world, an amazing abyss of tireless happiness,
only waiting to be unlocked once again.
p.s. i posted this once before but didnt get much critque on it. i wanna see if theres anyhtign wrong with it. one thing people might say is get rid of the my world your world thing, but i cant because that shows how each of us is feeling and leads into the our world section of the poem.
2007-01-13
18:19:47
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