I wrote a brief reading of Donne's 'The Flea', and wanted to know what people thought- what they thought of my arguments and how they think I can improve my writing style.
I think the structure of my argument can go a little chaotic, and I wanted to know how I could improve this.
The reading is at:
www.angelfire.com/space2/jimmy_breck-mc_kye/literary_resources/FleaSite.htm
I'm not posting this for ego-boosts, I'd just really like to hear some feedback from readers, even (especially, in fact) negative.
2007-01-11
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