This new and is for publication. I need to know what message it conveys to you, what feelings, how you interpret it, meter, etc
The dashes are for visual spacing purposes only! Ignore!
"Above Her Shoulders"
The starry silhouette shining over her shoulders
_ _ beseeches: Re-align to a harder view!
_ _ Grand design always hearkens back to rue.
Tarry darkness, and damnable pin light smolders
_ _ amidst hollow heat, lest to mine eyes: the beholders.
_ _ So petty, none too fine, and all too few, true
_ _ feelings are felt when looking beyond her hue.
Reeling and falling, failing! Love hast grown colder.
So short a while, up on top. Such courtly smiles,
_ _ coyly, couldst never stop. Oh! Whoa! Such trials!
Thou, expanse above, hast lain a burden upon my breast,
_ _ revoking my dove’s ascent! Down to permanent rest!
_ _ Grief! No relief…I canst no longer hold her,
_ _ with such resplendence above her shoulders.
2006-12-09
03:44:16
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