So, in English: "sleeping late on a cold winter morning, she sighs sweetly beside me"
So far all I have are individual bits and pieces in Japanese, but no really grasp of the grammar to pull it all together.
Here's a kind of lame first attempt: "Saetaasa no asane de tonari ni tameiki shimasu, okusan wa"
So, that's probably pretty terrible, right? Basically what I am looking for is something that sounds sweet and romantic, like snuggle on a cold winter morning... I don't even know if I am picking the correct word for "sigh". I might be saying "sigh of regret" which would spoil the intended meaning. Additionally, I kind of made up the word "saetaasa" which I am hoping has the same meaning as the word I *know* which is "saetayoru", which is a cold, chilly evening. I want I want to get the feeling of a cold, gloomy morning, buy then I am happy and cheerful because she is there next to me...
Also, any fixes for my particles/articles? I have no idea about 'de' or 'ne'. Any ideas?
2006-12-15
12:52:11
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