What do you think? I am sorta bad at writting poems, but please tell me what you think (It's called "Hang In There, I Know You Can"):
It's a cold winter and I'm sitting all alone
All I can think of is you
You make me laugh, you make my cry
I know I'll be with you soon
I'm at college, your at home
I don't know if I can survive so alone
I've only got 2 more years before I'll be back
Hang in there
I know you can
Your strong, your brave
Your my hero, babe
I can't think of anyone I love more
Stay with me, ok?
I'll be back in your arms someday
Someday soon
Tell me exactly what you think of it. This poem is for my friend. She was going to college with her boyfriend but then they had a major fight. She went to a new college and she only has 2 more years left before she can be back with him. My friend is in New York and her BF is in Washington. This is for them.
2007-12-08
08:41:30
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