What do you think? I am sorta bad at writting poems, but please tell me what you think (It's called "Hang In There, I Know You Can"):
It's a cold winter and I'm sitting all alone
All I can think of is you
You make me laugh, you make my cry
I know I'll be with you soon
I'm at college, your at home
I don't know if I can survive so alone
I've only got 2 more years before I'll be back
Hang in there
I know you can
Your strong, your brave
Your my hero, babe
I can't think of anyone I love more
Stay with me, ok?
I'll be back in your arms someday
Someday soon
Tell me exactly what you think of it. This poem is for my friend. She was going to college with her boyfriend but then they had a major fight. She went to a new college and she only has 2 more years left before she can be back with him. My friend is in New York and her BF is in Washington. This is for them.
2007-12-08 08:41:30 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Psychology
I cried writting this poem. My friend left behind everything. Her pets, her boyfriend, and even her friends. We barely stay in touch. I am sooo sad and this brought back so many touching memories when I wrote it.
2007-12-08 08:48:59 · update #1
Awh that is a lovely poem, Your very nice friend....
I say a good few ters will be shed once they read the poem.
2007-12-08 08:46:35 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
I really enjoyed your poem. You need to have more confidence you did a very good job and what a wonderful gift that will make. Heartfelt homemade gifts are the best!
2007-12-08 08:49:50 · answer #2 · answered by teresa m 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
such a nice poem....it actually made me cry..brought back memories for me too...hopefully everything will be better !!!
2007-12-08 13:03:19 · answer #3 · answered by urzalwayz5646 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Do you really really really want to know what I think of this shi* of a poam.
I LIKE IT. IT'S TOUCHING. GOOD JOB
2007-12-08 09:00:06 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I thoght that was really good! You are good at writing poems.
2007-12-08 08:45:37 · answer #5 · answered by ♥♫♪Through the Monsoon♥♫♪ 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it was great and had signifinit meaning you r a good friend
2007-12-08 08:49:42 · answer #6 · answered by Psychologist In The House 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
So cool
2007-12-08 11:53:35 · answer #7 · answered by Qyn 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It makes me SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
2007-12-08 08:49:04 · answer #8 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋