Psychology - March 2007

please can you give constructive comments on my poem, also could you please let me know if you can get the feeling i am trying to put across and if not why, many thanx for spending your time reading this poem

Dance

I love the way that you do wind
Envious eyes you do bind
Upon the dance floor you raise your hands
To the beat and all its demands
You swing your hips you can’t resist
To the beat you cannot miss

The music slows you sway with the sound
Smiling at me the dance partner you’ve found
Beat picks the tempo up once more
Encouraging us to stay on the dance floor

The lights blur as the sounds resonates
Within our souls and it insinuates
To move our bodies and dance away
All the troubles we we’ve had that day

2007-03-21 21:56:13 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous

please can you give constructive comments on my poem, also could you please let me know if you can get the feeling i am trying to put across and if not why, many thanx for spending your time reading this poem

The lonely poets

Writing poetry we do care
We have the skill and the flare
And even though we try so hard
It comes out like a greeting card

We sit looking at the monitor screen
We know it all, so it would seem
Our fingers type as we pour out ideas
So you can feel our lonely tears

Our feelings of joy sadness and sorrow
We write it down for you to read tomorrow
And if you feel a hint of what we express
Maybe you’ll understand our loneliness

Our poems may rhyme, or they may not
But the words we put shouldn’t be forgot
There from the heart and truth be told
Our thoughts and loves will never grow old

So after reading one of our works
Try and understand our funny quirks
For we try and do the hardest task
Nor do we hide behind false masks

What you read is what you get
And hopefully you will never forget
A poet’s world is very glum
And this will never be undone

2007-03-21 21:51:34 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous

Truthful Answers Please....
I keep dreaming of my exboyfriend and the dreams feel so real. When I wake up, I feel that my dreams must have just occurred.

2007-03-21 21:07:18 · 13 answers · asked by spee11 2

2007-03-21 21:04:35 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous

2007-03-21 21:02:21 · 18 answers · asked by Anonymous

2007-03-21 20:55:01 · 8 answers · asked by pinku 1

Im sooo scared to die that im losing sleep over it and its ruining my life i fear it sooo much i never enjoy life! Any advice to help me get of this phobia or whatever so i can live a happy life?

2007-03-21 20:42:35 · 8 answers · asked by N!cky 5

why can't you have what you wnat?
i want a job were i can show my art
but i didn't find one

WHAT WAS YOUR DREAM JOB?

2007-03-21 20:26:00 · 5 answers · asked by me 2

2007-03-21 20:23:03 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous

I experience deja vu when I go outside inside and even the food I eat. My deja vu so powerful I even feel like im dreaming the same thing that once occured. I don't really know what to do but it drives me nuts and thats why I have to right about it and even now I feel like I already wrote this Paragraph. Anyone experiencing the same thing like me?

2007-03-21 19:47:21 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous

I know to take everything on the internet with a grain of salt, especially a test that instantly diagnoses you with SPD or various other problems. But it really irritated me that I scored so high on the test. So I tried it again on another site and same result. I know that schizoids/sociopath's are not supposed to care or whatever, and sadly I truly dont but something tends to hit you a little harder when there "appears" to be proof contrary to your own thoughts. I ran down the list of things they characterize schizoid's typically. And best I can tell they all seem to be dead on. It was actually very disconcerting. Oh and on the online scoring it said I was a 88% sociopath? Unsettling is the fact that the only reason I am thinking I might be is due to the fact that I am great with puzzles and with everything I have read these last few days I am fitting very well into this part of the puzzle.

2007-03-21 19:45:57 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous

I want to change mine to become a better person.
because I dont like the way I am so negative and agitated, I would like a complete turnaround for myself. I want to act happier and more carefree instead of angry and high strung. Have any of you changed yourself in a big way? How did others react to the new you?

2007-03-21 19:26:57 · 10 answers · asked by bananapuddingwithcoolwhip 2

2007-03-21 19:22:37 · 7 answers · asked by Eric Inri 6

I am not a disable, I am just very weak. All my body parts have problems. I will make other people lose time and money for me, I can't do anything to the society, absolutely nothing (because I can't sit long with my back, can't read long with my eyes...).
I think that I am like an useless laptop which comsumes electricity for its own suffering.

2007-03-21 19:22:02 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous

sins,lies etc....

2007-03-21 19:21:41 · 19 answers · asked by archaeology 1

I ended the friendship with a friend due to the fact that 1) she said something she never apologized for
2) I felt like I was doing all the work
* I gave her hints I was pissed-by not chatting with her on aim. But I'm sure she never got the hint.We stayed in contact via email; aim or snail mail (which meant a lot, because she is very busy with school and she took time out to write to me, and she didn't have to)-(we live in different states). I gave her another chance and I felt she wasn't trying, so I ended the friendship-I never exactly told her it was over. I felt I shouldn't, because I feel as though she wouldn't care. I don't know that for sure, it is just my guess, and I could be wrong, and that is why I am asking if I should chat with her again and tell her how I feel and from there make my mind up?..I could be wrong and I wouldn't want to regret it.

2007-03-21 19:17:38 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous

If You're given a chance to choose between health and wealth what would be your choice?(You are poor but your you are free from any illness, or you are wealthy but you have an amnesia.)

2007-03-21 18:53:34 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous

i procrastinate a whole lot and i suffer the consequences like at school or practicing. what can i do to help get over the habit?

2007-03-21 18:34:34 · 12 answers · asked by that one girl from that one band 3

A 'Spillover function' occurs when leisure is no more than an extension of work experiences and attitudes according to Leisure theorist???

2007-03-21 18:26:21 · 4 answers · asked by latinrose17 2

2007-03-21 18:23:12 · 1 answers · asked by latinrose17 2

Why doesn't everyone live in New York or LA? Even Chicago would do.

2007-03-21 18:19:47 · 11 answers · asked by Ejsenstejn 2

I've always just wanted to be understood...people judge me so easily. Most act as if they comprehend but quickly disregard my thoughts.
I think it would make a big difference but till then...

2007-03-21 18:12:20 · 10 answers · asked by betterthankyourluckystarx 1

I have some kind of natural strength with me. I see things which would happen in the future of time far away. If I want something involuntarily, I get it in the future for sure. If I feel something involuntarily, it happens in the future. I know the feeling of involuntarily. If a thought comes into me very specially, I can't stop it. It is not what I want, It is not what I feel, a separate feeling comes into me and give me a thought that will happen in the future. I cannot control it. Usually the things from the thoughts happen like at least 1 year after. I remember them because, the feelings that i get those thoughts are special. I really would like to know if there are other people who have the same kind of thing happening to me. Thank you.

2007-03-21 18:11:03 · 5 answers · asked by future 1

2007-03-21 18:02:59 · 7 answers · asked by †ℓєgєи∂ кιℓℓєя™† 5

2007-03-21 18:01:48 · 5 answers · asked by Eric Inri 6

my 13 year old son was in a devatating car crash less than6months ago.he was sent sailing out of the car and landed on top of his grama.she lost her life he was lifelined to a local hospital.since i have gotten him into counseling the have not only diagnosed him with post traumatic stress disorder but also bi-polar disorder.i am no stranger to this so i know that it is a fragile thing.he has begun getting in trouble in many of his classes at school and is fighting,some have been his responsibility and some havent like today a boy hit my son and my son was kicked out 4,3days and the other boy was also until we left the school only to get aphonecall sayingthe other boywould b allowed back to school tomorrow inconsistent with policies and the teatment my son received when hitting another student.i tried to explain to her that this only conveyed double standards to my son.he was upset by this and i fear worse trouble when he reports to school.iwishshewouldsheitfromeveryonespoint.

2007-03-21 17:53:28 · 13 answers · asked by Michelle B 1

For some reason, it seems like it would be a nice change for me.

2007-03-21 17:46:19 · 22 answers · asked by Odysseus J 3

Let's say that you had the following talents:
- able to type 90 to 110 words per minute
- sketch artist... excellent at drawing landscapes and portraits for people... anything they want... whether it's color or black and white
- able to play piano
- good graphic artist
- good with computers... also know business management material (good computer tech)
- know A LOT of songs... reggae, rap, r&b... heard 'em all and know many songs by heart
- really funny person and can make anyone laugh
- great and creative web page designer
- know some software programming to SOME extent
How would you use these talents and combine them in some way to really be known to the public and make money? and how would you advertise yourself etc....?

2007-03-21 17:45:42 · 8 answers · asked by Ryder 1

Deep down women are attracted to guys that are complex,hard to figure out,and go against the grain.

2007-03-21 17:39:17 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous

2007-03-21 17:37:41 · 6 answers · asked by Butterfly 1