is this a good poem about my ex.
Mans one mistake,so commonly made
Everyone needs to love, everyone needs to beg
Words I thought I would never use
I used them to often, and so badly did I abuse
He lent his heart out,
It was hers to keep
She would forever hold it
No longer hide and seek
But soon
She took the mans heart and threw it to the ground
Never telling the man, it was no where to be found
He lived without a heart
Thought he did not yet know it
He swore he could still feeling it beating
But all he really felt, was the starting of fading
The sensation had started as just a tingle
As the pain grew worse, his sanity was strained
He realized too late what had happened
He was to far gone,
He waited in silence for the end to come
Would this “death” be fun
But god wouldnt kill him
Death would end his pain
The way he was to die, hardly could be called humane
And there he stood
All life leaking out of him
He closed his eyes
He knew the end had arrived
His legs began to buckle
His soul began to leave
His body started to tremble,
His chest began to heave
as he fell he prayed for fair descent
He knew his last few months badly spent
No more of this man was to be found
It all went dark,as he hit the cold ground
Because when a man loves, his heart will be broken
It would be better,those three words had never been spoken
A word of the wise I know to be true
Don’t fall in love, it will be the end of you.
2007-03-20
15:46:35
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