I wrote a poem about life.
plz tell me whats good/not so good about it and how I should fix it.
thanks.
Life
Is a game.
Play it right,
and you'll get to roll again.
Take a wrong turn,
and it's over.
Life
Is a battle
a never ending fight between you
and the rest of the world.
Stay strong,
be optimistic,
and you'll survive.
Give up,
and quit,
and it ends.
Life
Is a heart.
Something that can be broken or torn
Bruised or Scarred.
Hearts can be patched though,
and wars can be declared as truce,
and games, you can always replay them
2006-06-06
14:01:02
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5 answers
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Vallerie
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