I mean, I composed one that was pretty good in my opinion.. I really did feel like it was convincing enough..
But i was just wondering if I left something out that would've made me get a better shoe in.. Like, what really convinces the reviewers that you're in real need for financial aid (personally).. I'm not talking about "Oh just tell them ur 'estimated family contribution' or something".. I'm talking about, what else?!
I've already explained (in my previous letter to a scholarship) how my family strived hard to come to the US & how it was hard on EACH of us to adapt, not just financial-wise either..
But yah, if any of y'all were able to write a good letter, give me suggestions.. cuz the last one I wrote for a region scholarship, i didn't get.. and I even included REALLY impressive accomplishments I've done (such as being Valedictorian, captain/commander/president of numerous things, big on community service, and so forth).. so PLEASE help me out!
2007-03-30
10:39:17
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