My Dad owns a business. a guy skipped out on his bill. Dad wrote a letter. i think it's wishy washy. Names left out to protect identites. i need opinions & ideas on how to make it sound more serious.
Customers name,
We have submitted your check, number ####, for $225.00 to your bank twice & it was returned both times for insufficient funds. We called "name" on Saturday August 5, 2006 at your home phone in Some Town, USA & "name" told me to leave a message on his cell phone & he would take care of it on Monday August 7, 2006. I left the message but did not hear from "name". On Wednesday August 9, 2006 I called the home phone in Some Town USA & that number is no longer in service. I called "names" cell number & the message said the number was incorrect. I then called your bank in Some Town USA; they are not allowed to give info on their customers. If you would please correct this and send us a certified check before August 21, 2006 we would really appreciate it.
2006-08-10
16:49:04
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purple dove
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