Poetry

I assume writing sinks me in the seas of desperation
It shows the gloomiest feelings I lock inside
It makes all excesses come to life
It makes my heart jump on a higher happiness when Joy lights up
It makes my soul get blackened by the dark sad desolation

It produces exaggeration
It makes me stick to a temporary situation

It glows it shines,
It hurts it kills
It kills all thoughts, For words they turn
Spontaneous not, clear slate does not.

2007-10-05 15:54:39 · 4 answers · asked by Calíope!* 3

You Live On
Written by Semper Fi Reborn 10/5/07

You live on,
In our minds and memories.
An endless symphony of love,
A message of peace.
A friend.
Now it us who must feed on your strength.
Right past the end,
Is a new beginning.
There is nothing,
Your friends would not do.
To have more of you,
On a sunny day.
So take with you,
Our love.
All of the joy,
That we send today.
Your Strength Lives On!
Gnostic!!!!!!!
And so shall you!

2007-10-05 13:31:25 · 13 answers · asked by Semp-listic! 7

plz and thx

2007-10-05 11:37:11 · 4 answers · asked by Lexi 2

Knifes,
Bullies,
Drugs,
Are all we have in this world today?
If we continue this the world will fall apart,
And we won’t be able to stay.
Knifes,
Bullies,
Drugs,
Are all we have in this world today?
So sitting on are buts all day smoking weed,
Is not good for society.
Knifes,
Bullies,
Drugs
Are all we have in this world today?
Teachers sitting on there buts apparently teaching stuff,
But how can the children who are being picked on learn,
When all the teacher is doing is sitting around on there bum.
Knifes,
Bullies,
Drugs
Are all we have in this world today?
Weapons of mass destruction are all that’s on peoples mind,
Till they find there self held at the throat with a knife!
So knifes,
So bullies,
So drugs,
Are all I can see in this world today!
Do you agree?

2007-10-05 08:47:27 · 6 answers · asked by Katja ie tattybow 1

holocaust means devastation and the word can not be claimed by World War II victims alone.
Here is ther direct link to my short piece of writing;
http://meanderingtrevor.blogspot.com/2007/10/looking-back-we-never-forgot-how-to.html

2007-10-05 01:49:11 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous

baby where u wanna go
we are floating outta space

2007-10-05 01:42:26 · 6 answers · asked by sunny 4

i was 4 and dreamt about a beautiful world.
mummy and daddy would take me all over the world,
where they build castles from sand,
and thought i could be invisible

2007-10-05 01:41:01 · 7 answers · asked by sunny 4

Casanova


It was a night like this
full moon and some mist
and the streets of “jade” were dead

And rumor still had it
he hid in some attic
then romanced while all were in bed

Some say he died
some say he’s alive
but, ran off from the men in town

and the women will hide
that he’s there every night
so thankful that he’s still around

“Casanova, my friend
please do come again
how my heart aches for you desperately”

“I could never again
be pleased with my man
not after you spent time with me”

He’s the ultimate lover
and surly no other
could live up to his devious ways

Let the secrete be kept
and just kick back instead
cause tonight, just may be your day...

2007-10-04 23:55:53 · 10 answers · asked by ? 3

2007-10-04 21:54:31 · 14 answers · asked by Angela 2

Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening
Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.
My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.
He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.
The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.

2007-10-04 20:59:03 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous

2007-10-04 20:07:22 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous

What does the quoted sentence mean? Is the animal the savage or the shaken person?

2007-10-04 18:18:23 · 2 answers · asked by clarevale 2

I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.

I just dont understand why he says he took the one less traveled by when previously he mentions they were evenly worn. Adn says it made all the difference? How did it make such a huge difference?

2007-10-04 17:54:05 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous

Truth dancing,
Two lips passing,
Something hiding,
Birds nesting,
Babies fasting,
Sure of feasting,
Weeping,
Keening,
Peering,
Always speaking...

2007-10-04 16:26:53 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous

She offered her honor,
I honored her offer,
All night long,
I was on and off her.

2007-10-04 14:55:10 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous

{I'll be gone this weekend to the shooting range LAMO got's to renew my license *^_^* wish me luck though as I have a new found fear of guns :~(` and can't seem to shake it. I thought I post a write for y'all and let you know, I'm always thinking of ya, Shad @)~<~ {including the mouthy ones, after all, they're people too *^_^*}

"yAhOoLiGaNs"


Such unique people
brought together
in a seemingly
vast world

Destined to answer
questions from
Men, women,
boys and girls

Feverishly
typing
one answer
at a time

but, while typing
did you ever think
you’d end up
a friend of mine?

It’d be so sweet
if we were close
maybe drank
at the same café’?

Or even if we
could just pass by
each other and
smile and wave

I’m so glad
I’ve had the honor
to meet such
a wonderful group

Just keep posting
your questions
and I’ll do my best
to answer you...


Lovin’ y’all

All the Very Best, Shad @)~>~

2007-10-04 14:14:19 · 13 answers · asked by ? 3

thank a veteran
We wear the poppy red to represent our dead
Brave men who fought in the war that’s what we wear the poppy for
You may not have meet um’ but still they gave you freedom
Thank a veteran today thank them in every single way
Every thing you have today wouldn’t be this way
If it wasn’t for the people before now you ask me how
They fought in the Great War and went through pain and sore
Just for you today the didn’t even know you but hey!
That didn’t stop them so take time to remember them

2007-10-04 13:08:56 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous

What is the poet's message toward poetry in "How to Eat a Poem?" I get that it can be digested in every way possible, but I don't think I can write a page on that.

2007-10-04 09:26:40 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous

lost in lust

As I ponder the depths of our love,
I look right up at you, straight up above.
Riding me like a cowgirl in the saddle,
Lying next to the bed, a small black paddle.

Sometimes our love takes unexpected turns,
Even our pleasure sometimes it still burns.
Pain is to pleasure and pleasure sometimes pain,
But I assure you we are both really same.

Our love is anything but boring and plain,
Experimentation, the name of the game.
Whatever my angel wants, we will give it a try,
I'll do whatever she wants, no need to ask why.

Sometimes we want just to be held and loved,
Like two new lovers, we fit like a glove.
Hand held in hand, walking on the beach,
Our sand fantasy, just barely out of reach.

Soon it comes down to, any fantasy we like,
Our love it will burst forth, like a breakaway dyke.
A flood of our fantasies, that we have in our mind,
Anything that we want, anytime or anykind.

2007-10-04 09:23:39 · 5 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3

lies

Choked by your own lies,
Try this on for size
Contolled by your brainwashed mind
Salvation you will never find
Your religion makes me sick
People are so very thick
I answer to no one
Not even to God's son
My life is live my way
Don't care what people say
Spend your life just kissing as*
Nose pressed up against the glass
There are no pearly gates
Maybe in some other state
No sympathy you get from me
You are right were you should be
Where is your salvation
While the world lives in starvation
I pity you and all your cries
I hope you choke on all those lies.


This is not anti-religion, but anti-hypocrite. Keep that in mind. I believe in God, just not organized religion.

2007-10-04 08:09:21 · 7 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3

i want to write a special message in a scroll
can i get one...?

2007-10-04 07:16:24 · 7 answers · asked by cinderella 3

"I'm the Girl"

I'm the girl
by myself in the corner
lost in my mind
full of daydreams and wonder

Im the girl
with my head held down
expression stony, sad, angry
with the usual frown

Im the girl
who has no name
doesnt have many friends
and will never gain highschool fame

At least thats what you think
when you look at me
thinking you know
but you cant really see

Im the girl
who doesnt want to be you
I couldnt care less what you think
you dont have a clue

Im the girl
who just wants to be me
dont need your input
nor your sympathy

Im the girl
who you cant see
cause your too caught up in yourself
to see that I'm ME.

2007-10-04 04:19:42 · 13 answers · asked by I think I'm Dumb ~Amy~ 7

Well, I thought it would be neat to give everyone a chance to post their favorite poem. Whatever you like.

Peace to all.

2007-10-04 03:13:07 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous

What does this song by the Foo Fighters mean to you? If it helps it's played by two acoustic guitars and sang kinda slowly.

Razor by the Foo Fighters

Wake up it's time
We need to find a better place to hide
Make up your mind
I need to know I need to know tonight

Sweet and divine
Razor of mine
Sweet and divine
Razorblade shine

Patience my dear
We could spend a lifetime waiting here
Maybe this time
I hope I get the chance to say goodbye

Sweet and divine
Razor of mine
Sweet and divine
Razor of mine

Day after day
Cutting away
Day after day
But anyway

Wake up it's time
We need to find a better place to hide
Make up your mind
I need to know I need to know tonight

Sweet and divine
Razorblade shine

I thought this section would be the best place for this question. I know it's not a poem but I'm assuming their are people here with some good interpretation skills and would be willing to lend their skills to help me understand it better.

2007-10-04 01:57:14 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous

People knows it,
It's hidden deep down,
It's just there,
Waiting.

It tells us different things,
Whenever it's there,
Though sadness, pain and death,
Explains it most.

Silence is my friend,
My shelter, my comforter,
I find peace and security,
Whenever I'm with it.

To some it's a killer,
Slowly, killing every bit of life,
Every bit of energy,
One possesses.

Silence is here,
It lurks behind you,
Now it's up to you,
On how you see it.

2007-10-04 00:37:28 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous

Pain




So your mom, she's a mess
head ta toe in bruises
'Cause your dad, he comes to now and then
And you brother gets high
Damn near all the time
So you cut, hoping all this will end
And if you say, if you tell
Flames will rise up from hell
Burning what's left to debris
If you stay you'll keep sinkin'
Suicide, always thinkin'
Take a chance, take a chance with me
And
C'mon outta the pain
Leave behind the insane
Take my hand, let's run, run away
Ya, you have an escape
I can show you the way
To burst into life once again
And help lead your family
away
from all the pain
Sulkin' within demise
Now your hospitalized
Life slowly seeps from the gashes
Your life's on the line
No one visits this time
They're drownin' in their own ashes
If you wake, if you rise
Future compremises
Are yours to lead the way
It's right here can't you see?
Just quit lookin' through me!
Listen to all I say
And
C'mon outta the pain

2007-10-03 23:07:55 · 10 answers · asked by ? 3

Black Rose.

The fragile black rose,
Alone in the street,
Frightened to move,
But brought to its feet,
By a mystical mind,
Hidden in shadows,
Reluctant to stir,
In the mist of an arrow.
Taking her petal,
By his right hand,
Feeling its texture,
A rough contraband,
An emotion so high,
His hand did run deep,
Relating his fear,
Of never to sleep.
By its thorn it did prick,
Poising syrup for him to sip,
Goodbye to the stranger,
The clock has struck twelve,
Into the shadows,
It did delve.

2007-10-03 22:23:01 · 7 answers · asked by kissaled 5

everyday im gone is a day he didnt
yet memory feeds his force to me hard as ten men
and i am naked on the bed again
my legs spread again
my body betrays me
but its not the first time
hey, at least it didnt take me by suprise

i have learned through abuse
to perfect the art of being functionally in panic
you could call me a manic
but i would fall again
make him feel tall
yea ill call him a big man
and he'd say its so small
itll never be like that again
dont be scared babygirl
just let me in
let me in
let me in

everyday im gone is a day he didnt
but there comes a point in depression
when your pain is self-inflicted
so i am addicted
to naked on the bed again
my legs spread again
this time my man moves
smooth between my hips
but it hurts like the first time
someone licked the sugar coating off my eyes
and now, sometimes under covers
i cant tell liars from lovers

it's nearly ten years to the day
G-d got me
dropped me in the hands of grace
and

2007-10-03 19:13:16 · 5 answers · asked by smittnlittlkitn 5

Oh what to be for Halloween
so much before my eyes.
Although the aisle is crowded
there’s worse to my demise....

All the good stuff’s to high up
and unorganized indeed
Little kids with sticky hands
all crying aimlessly!

Just a suit is all I want
and maybe some false teeth
But, I can’t get through the shopping carts
even when asking please!

Ha, I found some makeup
just lying in the aisle
if I just get hold of it
I’d go as kiss when high!

Crap, some fat woman stepped on it
and she’s tracking all around!
Little Jimmy spilt his candy corn
and I’m blocked from getting out!

Decisions, decisions
Oh, what to be for Halloween?
I think this year, I’ll stay inside
and forget the whole damned thing!

2007-10-03 10:43:42 · 11 answers · asked by ? 3

Giving up hope
Living a lie

Time to face reality
Time to finally be true

No matter what I do
Every which way my thoughts turn
It always seems to end up right back to you

What is it about you that drives me insane
Why must my thoughts endure so much pain?

Guess this is what it feel like...
Too lose-
What you never gained...

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Please tell me what you think; it is my emotion on how I feel.

2007-10-03 10:04:27 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous