You Live On
Written by Semper Fi Reborn 10/5/07
You live on,
In our minds and memories.
An endless symphony of love,
A message of peace.
A friend.
Now it us who must feed on your strength.
Right past the end,
Is a new beginning.
There is nothing,
Your friends would not do.
To have more of you,
On a sunny day.
So take with you,
Our love.
All of the joy,
That we send today.
Your Strength Lives On!
Gnostic!!!!!!!
And so shall you!
2007-10-05 13:31:25 · 13 answers · asked by Semp-listic! 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Semper Fi that is the most beautiful poem of all times...You really know how to touch people with your poetry or questions..Nicely done..
2007-10-05 15:10:20 · answer #1 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
If I read it right, someone was only lost to the physical, but is still there in the spiritual. Past the end is a new beginning, and I for one am looking forward to that beginning which will never have an end.
Excellent poem too, btw. Good form and flow, easy to read and follow.
have a star, it's a shame I can't give you 2
2007-10-05 15:30:56 · answer #2 · answered by Dondi 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
this won't be approximately potential especially...yet i think of it applies... soreness And a woman spoke, saying, "let us know of soreness." And he stated: Your soreness is the breaking of the shell that encloses your know-how. even because of the fact the stone of the fruit could smash, that its heart would stand interior the solar, so could you comprehend soreness. and could you keep your heart in ask your self on the each and on a daily basis miracles of your existence, your soreness would not look much less wondrous than your excitement; and you will possibly settle for the seasons of your heart, on a similar time as you have continually commonplace the seasons that bypass over your fields. and you will possibly watch with serenity throughout the winters of your grief. numerous your soreness is self-chosen. it is the bitter potion via which the wellness care expert interior you heals your unwell self. consequently believe the wellness care expert, and drink his scientific care in silence and tranquillity: For his hand, nevertheless heavy and confusing, is guided via the soft hand of the Unseen, And the cup he brings, nevertheless it burn your lips, has been formed of the clay which the Potter has moistened along with his very own sacred tears. Khalil Gibran "The Profet"
2016-10-06 04:23:42 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful!
2007-10-06 02:10:19 · answer #4 · answered by Pacific Ocean 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
that is beautiful
if somebody wants a piece of me
on a sunny day
I'm usually sittin on the red cross beach at Walden Pond
if you are friendly I will chat with you
2007-10-05 13:35:20 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
A fine poem by all atributes, however you seem to make an effort at rhyming then pull back which causes confusion.
2007-10-06 00:25:30 · answer #6 · answered by kissaled 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like a memorial to a very special and well loved friend. It is beautiful!
2007-10-05 13:34:26 · answer #7 · answered by turkeybrooknj 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The poem's strength comes from its earnestness. You obviously loved whomever you lost. The poem itself is not very interesting, but for your own therapuetic benefit, you should continue to write about your feelings.
2007-10-05 13:35:00 · answer #8 · answered by Spee Diddy 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋
a very lovely poem indeed.
(((Semper)))
2007-10-06 01:18:32 · answer #9 · answered by ? 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
verrrrrrrrrrrrrrry nice. but it dosn't rhyme very well?? nice rythm
2007-10-05 13:34:06 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋