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lost in lust

As I ponder the depths of our love,
I look right up at you, straight up above.
Riding me like a cowgirl in the saddle,
Lying next to the bed, a small black paddle.

Sometimes our love takes unexpected turns,
Even our pleasure sometimes it still burns.
Pain is to pleasure and pleasure sometimes pain,
But I assure you we are both really same.

Our love is anything but boring and plain,
Experimentation, the name of the game.
Whatever my angel wants, we will give it a try,
I'll do whatever she wants, no need to ask why.

Sometimes we want just to be held and loved,
Like two new lovers, we fit like a glove.
Hand held in hand, walking on the beach,
Our sand fantasy, just barely out of reach.

Soon it comes down to, any fantasy we like,
Our love it will burst forth, like a breakaway dyke.
A flood of our fantasies, that we have in our mind,
Anything that we want, anytime or anykind.

2007-10-04 09:23:39 · 5 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

5 answers

Amazing! Kinda reminds me of those haiku's you used to write... those were awesome. Keep writing, as always you're amazing.
Love,
Shadow

2007-10-04 10:20:13 · answer #1 · answered by shadowofu_love29 3 · 0 0

If it gets any better, I won't be able to stand it, that was excellent. Bravo to you both, I hope it stays that way for you both.

2007-10-04 16:31:07 · answer #2 · answered by Dondi 7 · 0 0

Jesus O.o This is cool!!! ^.^ Hehehe What ever my angel wants :D DAMN STRAIGHT :P Kawaii!
-Ryko

2007-10-05 07:19:01 · answer #3 · answered by xxx 5 · 0 0

very nice in deed.,sounds like a nice big buffett...

2007-10-04 16:56:52 · answer #4 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0 0

Oy!!!!!!!!! This is hot!!!!! I'm sweating here!!!! Sexy poem, I like it way a lot.

2007-10-04 17:01:50 · answer #5 · answered by . 5 · 0 1

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