I just started writting poetry a week ago and am looking for some imput.. do you like it, do you not like it.. and what is it you like/dislike!
The Unwelcome Wait
As the waves cascade, on the rivers bend
So to do the trials of my life come and end
A haunting dream of visions past
Have opened another door at last
The Buddha's smile, the cigar's smell
Deliverance from our personal Hell
I roused myself from daily doubt
That perhaps my life would be without
The one True door I've searched to find
Knowing that door was never mine
But on I've searched, often dreaming
Plotting, planning even scheming
To steal this port of my hearts content
Never housing plans for repent
For the path now walked is mine I say
I've paid my debt in many a way
Yet still I walk, though I may pretend
As the waves cascade on the rivers bend
2007-01-18
03:31:00
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