I'm writing a fantasy story about three girls who have been brought up in different cultures and become friends at an academy. The story is about the mystery surrounding them and how they come to find themselves in th eface of danger.
Could you honestly tell me if you would continue reading the story after the prologue
Prologue: As told by all three girls
Milan: Academic City
“Carr?!” A voice shouted through the haze in my mind. Then a voice I didn’t quite recognize as my own croaked a question “what have I done?” “Thank Stars you’re alive, now come” The voice said brusquely but all had already gone black on my eyes. “Pick her up” The woman said and followed as the men carried the limp body of Carr, me, out of the room.
Star’s City: The Great Star Library
“Graspi…Graspi…” I murmured, my eyes scanning the shelves in front of me. “Academics … Denkians … Ex-Stars… Ah Graspi... finally.” And I pulled the large blue leather-bound book off the shelf.
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2007-09-03
07:38:47
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