Iam considering entering a poetry contest, and all I need you wonderful people to do, i: A-read my poem B-comment/suggest changes C-rate it out of 1-10 (10 being great/terrific'- 1 being horrible) D- If done properly, hope that I'll choose you as best answerer and enjoy ten pts as well as a good rating! Life's Like That Cold and grey, your hair blown astray. Flustered lost,a windswept sunhat. It may be confusing, but life's like that. Nervous with jitters, heart's butterflies flitter. perhaps your shy, oh what a drat. Left in the shadows, life's like that. Crazy with worry, feeling insane, riding around, on a destinationless train, Not sure of where you're at, spun like a spinner, life's like that. Not feeling well, full of regret. I can see how you feel, by your brow full of sweat. full of remorse, you feel small as a gnat. It's just human nature, because life's like that. ending below
2007-03-19
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