everyone says that I'm talented in writing, do I? but why I never win such writing competitions in school, even if I've done my best? i don't think I am really talented at all. I know I'm not confident, so what do you think about this (a piece of my poem)? Honestly. thanks everyone.
I can feel your presence beside me when you’re absent,
As clearly as a vista when the fog faded and the rainbow emerged
Because when you’re absent, my child, I opened my heart,
and the memories of time we spent together are widely ajar.
Do you know the future, lad?
So just closed your eyes and find it.
Because the future is at the front of the leading lead of this very road,
Smelled like summer in the breeze of the winter’s wind.
As I’m convinced to your rejoinder someday,
And we’ll be there laying our back upon the real savannah,
watching the stars in the depth of the night,
placing our parted heart to a whole union.
2006-11-03
16:13:44
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