I start almost every sentence in this paragraph with "I" and don't know what else to use! Any suggestions are greatly appreciated. Thanks.
Here's the paragraph:
"Before I knew it, I was in front of the building, my destination. I’d made it without any problems. I held my breath as I looked at my watch; the luck was in my favor: I’d made it in time. I hurried in and chanced a quick glance behind me, to make sure I wasn’t being followed. I didn’t see anyone, but I looked for cover just in case. I spied a small nook to my left and stealthily advanced toward it."
2007-11-18
03:24:54
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