For a Shakespeare Improve class I had to write a sonnet so I thought I would share it with you guys!
Sonnet #1
Sir, thy handsomeness did possess my sight
So that mine eyes would not move from thy face.
In this my love for thee grew like a night
That covers the sky with a steeds fast pace.
Thy smile is like an affectionate sun,
It warms my cold skin and shines in mine heart:
It charms like a sunset that is fresh 'n young
And spans the sky with its colors like art.
Thy skin is the color of milk chocolate
And yet, I would melt in thy sweet embrace
I long to taste the sweetness of your lips
And my cheek brush the smoothness of your face.
But, I fear that thou art to far from me
To far to ever dream of reaching thee.
How Did This Affect You?
I Loved It, Write More!
It Was Ok/Good, But I Would Make Some Changes. (What and Why?)
It Was Horrible, Please Destroy This Crap!
Yeah, Whatever, I Guess, Ummmmmmmm Sure?
What's A Sonnet?
2007-06-10
22:52:30
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