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It was late on a balmy summer's evening, few hours before the terrible events I'm going to tell you about began, that I arrived at the city of Londa. Supposedly the greatest city in the world.
That night I was quite happy with the way everything went. The city wasn't as expensive as I had expected and I managed to have lots of fun. That included having feverish love making with on of those famous Londan prostitutes and getting drunk on the finest spirits I'd ever tasted . That night I went to bed utterly satisfied with the way things were going. As I lay my head on the pillow I revised my plans for the next day. I would wake up early, have a quick breakfast, pay the innkeeper, then go searching for the city's best breeder from whom I would buy a couple of hairy beasts, healthy male and female capable of mating....
2006-12-26
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