i'm a chinese.Resently, I need to give a representation in class, i want sb to help me to check out if there is any mistake in the fllowing statement,and if possible, please change it , so it seem more like oral English. thanks a lot :
and Canute became the only ruler of England. Later ,his empire expanded quickly. It include England, Denmark , Norway and many other places. This was the most powerful empire in the Viking history.
Besides attacked the British isles, the Danes also invaded the continental Europe.
In 885 AD, the Danes invaded Paris. Although they couldn’t occupied Paris, they had forced the France king to admit their leader Rollos as the duke. And they also took control of a large terrority in Northern France. This area was called Nomandy. Later more and more Vikings settled here.
The Normandy duchy became more and more powerful. And in the year 1066, the leader of Normandy William, led his army to England.
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