She's just a friend, nothing like that, I just needed an opinion....what do you think? She says she doesn't like poems in general....but does this suck or is it good?
Thanks
Closer
The closest of friends,
But I want to be closer,
When I see you,
You lift me up,
When you're not here,
I fall without you,
I just want to stay high all day.
He loves you,
And she loves me,
But you don't love him,
And I don't love her,
But I do love you.
A mirror of what I see,
You've made me a better person,
I find it hard to tell you,
That you're the only person I see.
Is it worth losing,
Two loves for one,
If that one love,
Is greater than the two?
2007-03-09
08:36:15
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