Family & Relationships - 14 October 2006

I would like to know if this poem I wrote myself is any good. I am 13, so it might need work. Don't be afraid (if you are...not saying you aren't, but some are) to criticise it.

Old truths hold her dear;
Alas she shows her fear.
As she weeps such sorrow;
There is no telling what will happen tomorrow.

'Til the break of dawn she cries;
For there is no end to her demise.
She loves a love she cannot bear;
He breaks another heart to show her he can care.

Breaking away, so painful and slow;
Although she knows that soon they must go.
He touches her gently with the slightest touch;
For his love for her is so much.

They can't be together night or day;
Both knowing it has to be this way.
Tonight is the end of today;
So why must it all end in this painful way?


Someone once said that the greatest poets were the ones who had the worst lives, i.e. Edgar Allen Poe. If any of the poem confuses you, for example, "He breaks another heart...." means he was cheating on her.

2006-10-14 07:49:50 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Singles & Dating

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2006-10-14 07:48:34 · 2 answers · asked by freckleface 4 in Other - Family & Relationships

A trumpet player in ur grade or a horn player in the grade above u?

2006-10-14 07:48:11 · 7 answers · asked by coolpotatoeslive 5 in Singles & Dating

2006-10-14 07:48:03 · 17 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family

We were best friends last year, and then, all of a sudden, she hates me! I just don't know what to do!

2006-10-14 07:48:02 · 6 answers · asked by C h a n d l e r ♥ 1 in Friends

2006-10-14 07:47:25 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Singles & Dating

he has hidden from me a lo of times when he went out with his friends

2006-10-14 07:47:08 · 16 answers · asked by innbabe 1 in Singles & Dating

I accidentally spilled hot chocolate on this guy's shoes. I expected him to be pissed and apologized and offered to pay for a cleaning bill but he just laughed gave me a hug and told me how cute I am. =) some mess-ups are a good thing

2006-10-14 07:47:04 · 18 answers · asked by Bethany 2 in Singles & Dating

Im a single mom and would like to no where I can meet a single man w/ children. Are there any single parent organizations in St. Louis?

2006-10-14 07:47:01 · 1 answers · asked by Amanda S 1 in Singles & Dating

new marriage, can they make new wife pay for a child who isnt hers

2006-10-14 07:46:57 · 6 answers · asked by steph121m 1 in Marriage & Divorce

I met a guy in the islands-he dazzled me-we met for 10 minutes-I sent a note telling him I wanted to ask him out- he emailed me back saying he would of said yes, and asking for a picture as if he couldn't remember me- so now a couple of emails later he is still asking for a photo- this is an ugly test for men whose radar you didn't hit? Right? Should I send the photo- or not- or sent a knock out younger picture of me and say- here it is- and for asking me to pass the ugly test- forget it---ughh what to do?- I really liked this guy, darn it.

2006-10-14 07:46:21 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Marriage & Divorce

My ex-boyfriend put this song up on his msn called "Always" by Bon Jovi. Do you know what this song really means? I checked out the lyrics but the song says some girl left the guy, BUT my ex was the one to end it. Is he hurt? What does this song mean, any opinions are fine:)

2006-10-14 07:45:07 · 11 answers · asked by sweet kisses 1 in Singles & Dating

What happneds when you are tired of dating, net chats, and everything else and you wanna find real love in Europe?Hehe, sounds funny but its true and i wann hear some good tips on how do you find mr.Right?Haw did oyu find Mr.Gay Right? Thank you

2006-10-14 07:45:05 · 5 answers · asked by T. Love 1 in Singles & Dating

He wanted NOTHING 2 do with me last year...now he is asking my best friend about people i like...if i've change and why i want 2 be with certain people. What should i do tell him to just leave me alone or talk to him and ask him why he wants 2 know about me so much?

2006-10-14 07:44:59 · 10 answers · asked by Alisa B 1 in Other - Family & Relationships

We were on talking terms when we worked together-he even came to my leaving do. Now when he sees me, he barely looks at me, and he has such a sour face. Why?

2006-10-14 07:44:15 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Other - Family & Relationships

Do you think two 14-year-olds can truly be in love?Like is it just a fake-ish kind of love or can it like be actual love?My boyfriend keeps telling me he loves me, and I can't say it back because I don't think you can be in love at this young of an age.What do you think?

2006-10-14 07:43:32 · 26 answers · asked by *smitty #17 1 in Other - Family & Relationships

it seems like i can praise my g/f night and day about how hot she is, and only mention her increasing thigh cellulite once a month, and she yells at me randomly days later and cries. I only mention it when she points it out herself. Am i suppose to lie and say, no you don't have "cottage cheese" when she obviously does. Will lieing to her and saying she looks fine really help her get rid of it? I want to help solve her problem, not make it worse by denying the truth.

2006-10-14 07:43:16 · 8 answers · asked by thedawn 2 in Singles & Dating

we had a love date, but i haven't seen him since because i told him i didn't want a relationship then, i suppose he thought it was an excuse to keep him away, but it wasn't, so none of us did the next move. Now i think about him a lot would you call him?it's a little out of place i think

2006-10-14 07:42:34 · 7 answers · asked by karol s 1 in Singles & Dating

2006-10-14 07:42:01 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Marriage & Divorce

i have this crush. we were introduced, i send him sms, add him in my friendster,i always smiles at him in short ive'been so good and kind to him. but then he still ignores me, never answer my sms (i even send him a birthday message but he never says thank you!and just for him to answer me i have to pretend that iam a different person -- how sad!) he even deleted me in his friendster. i dont know why he was like that. i really cant remember a single instance that i went beyond the suppose limit. im so sad because i just want him to be my friend. do you think i expect too much? i was thinking that maybe his past actions were mere flirtations. are guys really like that? what should i do? i know i have to forget all about it, but then some people especially his friends cannot forget (i could even overheard them saying nasty things about me -- they are really bad) please enlighten me.thank you!

2006-10-14 07:41:06 · 12 answers · asked by <fish_me> 2 in Other - Family & Relationships

okay first do guys like girls with small b**bs (how do they think a perfect b**b would look like nips in all) second i just got messenger and need some fun exciting new people to talk to and fast guys and girls i live in marion ohio so people close would be better but if not then whatever, but my screen name is sk8ergurl_22@yahoo.com, i just got out of a relationship and need to get on with my life find someone new... so help!

2006-10-14 07:40:49 · 6 answers · asked by *Babbs* 1 in Singles & Dating

I'm trying to come up with a nickname for a friend, his name is Michael. I want to call him somethuing other than Mike, or Mikey!

2006-10-14 07:40:19 · 23 answers · asked by Anonymous in Friends

look everybody knows what to do. you always hear----he did this,,she did this...you know whats wrong and whats right,
you just hope that someone will tell you what you just want to hear.
but you need to be straight up with yourself,,and stop lieing to yourself,deal with it and get on with your life. now who has something that they would like to share? it can be about any thing.

2006-10-14 07:40:13 · 5 answers · asked by lilastevenson42 2 in Marriage & Divorce

I think she it taking this too far she always joke about me being a baby and she shows me adult baby stuff on EBAY. She want to have over all Her friend for a party and make me sit in a real babys playpen etc.... is this too crazy? I just know everyone will be LOL at me......

2006-10-14 07:39:07 · 26 answers · asked by Anonymous in Singles & Dating

What is the cheapest way to get a divorce? I am with a man right now and he is still married to a not so good of a woman and I need some help trying to help him get a divorce. They have been seperated for years and she wont even let him see his children so plz help me!!!

2006-10-14 07:39:06 · 5 answers · asked by joeysgirl89 2 in Marriage & Divorce

How often do you think about the woman you cheated with?

2006-10-14 07:38:46 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Marriage & Divorce

2006-10-14 07:38:46 · 9 answers · asked by priya 1 in Friends

2006-10-14 07:38:37 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Singles & Dating

I have too much free time to be asking questions like these.

2006-10-14 07:38:03 · 6 answers · asked by sharp~* 1 in Other - Family & Relationships