this is my first paragraph.. please hlpe me fix it.. i need it to sound perfect.. more parts to come soon... it was to be a discriptive essay of what would be a hell for me in a first person narritive.. this is what i have.. spell check too please~!
It was as if it was yesturday, the most horrofying day I remember ever living. I found myself tied up to a chair, so tight that i could barely breath; needless to say, I was uncapable of screaming out for help. Someone had planned to make me life a living hell and so, I was. The darkness of room added to the suspence as only light came from a tiny window, way up high, on the wall. The only thing in sight was the muddy floor my chair was placed on. I knew, from what i saw, that anything, I could be expect, and so, it was.
2007-02-19
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