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grrrr! this is so hard .damn project is due on friday. =/
well anyway.....i need help. [[duh]] like i have to make up this whole community project && essay about our perfect world and i dont have any ideas. does any one have any??? please help mhe XD

2007-02-19 08:40:47 · 6 answers · asked by yourdirectingme 2 in Education & Reference Homework Help

grrrr! this is so hard .damn project is due on friday. =/
well anyway.....i need help. [[duh]] like i have to make up this whole community project && essay about a perfect world of how i would like it to be and so far my 3 topics are....
-community (people they lived around with)
-education & schools (wut they would learn and study)
-entertainment.hobbies. (wut they would do for fun)
and i know who would be the heroes of my community and they are the tennage mutant ninja tutrles =]
and i dont have any ideas of how combining it all together and getting mo info about my topics =/
so does any one have any other ideas???
please help mhe! XD

2007-02-19 09:57:07 · update #1

i have to make up this whole community project && essay about a perfect world of how i would like it to be and so far my 3 topics are....
-community (people they lived around with)
-education & schools (wut they would learn and study)
-entertainment.hobbies. (wut they would do for fun)
and i know who would be the heroes of my community and they are the tennage mutant ninja tutrles =]
and i dont have any ideas of how combining it all together and getting mo info about my topics =/
so does any one have any other ideas???
please help mhe! XD

2007-02-19 09:58:02 · update #2

6 answers

well the easiest way for me to get started writing is to think about that question? For example: What do I find to be an Important aspect in a Good World? think of the best things in life... Safety, Equality, and Freedom. these are my three major topics... it is usually best to have three topics.

Safety: the community plays an important role in how a citizen feels weather or not they feel safe, or remain in a cautious, or defensive state.

sub question on this category: what does the community do to help make it a safe place?
Police officers patrolling, well lighted and clean streets. (these sorts of things allow me to feel safe)

basically i take notes on my thoughts and ask a few more questions about each topic. each topic will be it's own paragraph... also an interesting source to look up would be "a brave new world" that might be an interesting source to quote if you find the theories discussed to be note worthy.

i hope that this helps a little bit... i willcheck back in a few to see if you need more help, or if someone else has offered you more advice...good luck.


one more note would be that there are no taxes in my perfect world!



alright i'm going to imagin that his is not a university essay... alright your three topics are...
-community (people they lived around with)

-education & schools (wut they would learn and study)

-entertainment.hobbies. (wut they would do for fun

starting with the first one and apparently the ninja turtles... what about the community makes this place perfect. is it a gated community where everyone is freindly, and cheefull. if so what keeps it that way? the ninja turtles, are they going to be your political figures? becasue i doubt any one would act up with the ninja turtles being the mayor, and law enforcement.

education is always important this may be more dificult to tie the turtles into... i am unsure about how to do this...

Lastley hobbies and entertainment. the turtles could host a monthly pizza party allowing the community to get to know eachother and they could partake in games, and dancing...

hope this is helpful... good luck

2007-02-19 08:57:26 · answer #1 · answered by deep in thought 2 · 0 0

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2017-02-17 21:01:58 · answer #2 · answered by Randy 4 · 0 0

say something about a perfect community with peace love and no violence, where people live happy llives, and the weather is always good, say something about the police don't even need to do any work arresting anybody a fantasy land with peace and love and happiness all the crap

2007-02-19 08:44:52 · answer #3 · answered by Breeepppp 3 · 0 0

you have some solid info and motives on your application yet there are multiple errors. in case you ask somebody you have confidence who's community English speaker they are going to be waiting to restoration the matters or on the different hand use a employer like Editangels who would be waiting to wok wonders for you.

2016-09-29 08:22:11 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0 0

well what is YOUR perfect world? what elements would you incorporate?

me...

first off there wouldnt be any technology and.. people would be very distant from eachother.. to prevent from fights and all anddddd people would all look the same

boring but safe :D

2007-02-19 08:44:56 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

well in my opinion this world is hell and is **** but if you need to write about a perfect world look up some stuff from google.com etc!

2007-02-19 08:43:35 · answer #6 · answered by Gabriella R. 2 · 0 0

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