Poetry

For this week, our school will be into many activities and one of them will be poem writing.
In my class, I'm the representative in poem making
because my teacher said that I'm the only one in my class that is poetic.
I know I can do it, but I'll need help, my friends can't help me because like I said, my teacher said that I'm the only one in my class that is poetic.
So, please help me out.
List some sources if you have, please.

Oh!
And just so you know,
Let me remind you,
that I will be giving 10 points to the best answer.
So, you might want to consider in helping me out.

And please, I beg you out there
If there are some negative thoughts out there, keep it to yourself (e.g an answer like, "DO YOUR OWN HOMEWORK")
If you use some vulgar words, if you do put negative/vulgar words regarding my poem, I'll report you, I'm not afraid to do it.

A lot of Thank yous to the people who will help me out.
: - )

2007-11-17 01:25:16 · 2 answers · asked by MCJH94 2

[edited tis poem a bit]
[13 and crap at poetry]
[but needed to get some feelins/memories out]
[so don't care if its crap]
[your opinions/comments please?]

Feel something.
In dim light its near.
Be brave, keep on walking.

Should have run.
Icy hand grips arm.
Pulled deep into the woods.

Try to scream.
But the words don’t come.
Being hit to the ground.

I eventually shout.
He down tight
Can barely move filled with fright.

It finally stops.
I get up and run.
Out the woods on the road.

I stumble but.
I pick myself up.
The path seems much longer.

Reach destination.
The time has passed
Safe now but still bleeding.

A memory.
A pain to last forever.
Will never have my innocence back.

2007-11-17 01:21:21 · 4 answers · asked by Gerard W 1

Limbo....

A place of confinement and restraint...
It's where you end up when you neither belong to heaven or hell
floating through timeless space...in a motion
so...exhausting...straining...tormenting...
everything you see moves in shadows
forever waiting wearily for something...
something vague...could be a beginning or an end
hopelessness immense...
a parody so vexedly intense
where every hour of everyday is eternity
Caught in a time of infinite futile tarry.

2007-11-16 21:43:25 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous

For Mom

the foul stench of your putrid flesh
haunting me even in my little death
You were there lounging on deathbed
The hideous smell of rotten eggs
Room darkens with hate and gore
Raw wounds exposed to the core
I can barely breathe...I abhorred...you
I am sorry...
I should be guilty...

2007-11-16 21:40:26 · 29 answers · asked by Anonymous

To be dead

empty...void......night after night
day after day...darkness...fright...
a living carcass, restless...pointless
Blinded, scarred...falling wingless
a troubled soul...damned in hell
fathomless purgatory of the unwell
screaming..fading...tormented
bleeding..waiting...dead

2007-11-16 21:28:18 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous

Read again

why do i keep going over my poems
i've read them all before
still i keep reading and re reading
it 's like viewing myself in a mirror
crashing...shattering...
it 's like seeing my own blood
seeping...trickling...gushing
it's like feeling all my pain
over and over again...and again, , ,

2007-11-16 21:26:53 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous

what is the site?

2007-11-16 18:36:44 · 7 answers · asked by Unknown Ninja 1

I'm looking for Arabic love quotes or short poems....

2007-11-16 18:01:52 · 2 answers · asked by gabbs 1

100 words or more!
thx!

2007-11-16 13:52:10 · 4 answers · asked by AZN 2

According To Him (The Jackass)
Written by Semper Fi Reborn

According to that jackass,
You live with,
You're worthless, can't cook,
Can't do anything right.
If he didn't feel sorry for you,
He ask you to leave his sight.
But you're pitiful.
It would be too much trouble,
To get rid of you.
Soo boo-hoo-hoo in your tissue.
You have issues.

But he's wrong.
He's a jack ***!
What did you expect?
That this loser would come home,
And hand you his check?
Yeah right.
Those chances are too slim.
You're a Queen in this life.
Just not according to him.

2007-11-16 13:07:30 · 10 answers · asked by Semp-listic! 7

Lame (haha diggin my own grave)

Yeah yeah you got me smokin two packs a day!
I'm sure my lungs are now charcoaled gray! (*lights another stick)
At night i get all shitfaced i drown my tears away
can't believe this mess you put me through!
all the crap you do has made me Oh so blue
Now i'm wasted! wasted i tell ya this is true!
countless emptie bottles under a pile of dirty ashes
gawd and the rashes oh these rashes! (*opens another bottle)
My oh my! the nerve to dump on me this pain
What a shame! Oh baby baby you are so lame!

____________________________
yeah i know...it's like "smelly cat" =P

2007-11-16 01:49:50 · 17 answers · asked by Anonymous

Christ mass comes but once a year,
Celebrate with lusty cheer.

Only one and thirty days, left to go.
Commercial days, to get the presents ,O.

August now the count is started,
Marked with lumps of melted.
Advent chocolate.

To remember that stable manger,
Now long corroded in that,
Time in Bethlehem.

Rush to get the gifts and presents,
Forget,not.
Not any one?

Turkey, Duck, Goose or Pullet.
Ham, Beef, or even the Lamb.
Nuts, pudding, fruit, rum.

All this I watch in insulare environment.
I make no comment drole.
In this closed and walled confinement.
I have 12 Christmases to Parole.

2007-11-16 00:43:52 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous

2007-11-15 21:45:32 · 2 answers · asked by erykah b 1

i have original letter of congratulations to her neice cindy anyone know her writings?

2007-11-15 21:21:50 · 2 answers · asked by wishalot101 3

Our homework assignment was to write a sonnet just like the example. We we're to start the poem off "Shall I compare thee to _________" Every other line in the poem must rhyme (except for the last two lines which must rhyme together) and each line must have exactly 10 syllables. The poem is to be reffered to someone you like/love, real or imaginary. This is about my girlfriend and I am a bad poem writer so please help me fix it. Here it is:

Shall I compare thee to my favorite song
The sound of you is soothing to my ear
I want to listen to you all day long
You are the only one I want to hear
I am so grateful that I had found you
My life without you would make me lonley
I feel so radiant when around you
I want to be with you and you only
You're the greatest thing to happen to me
You're perfect and could never be replaced
I could stay with you for eternity
So you're the one I decided to chase
This is really how I feel about you
I could never really live without you

2007-11-15 17:57:18 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous

Johanna's Poem on the wall (above the stage) in Bobby Mackey's Haunted club??(Gates of Hell)

I am looking for the entire Poem if anyone knows it. Please Help!

2007-11-15 17:44:33 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous

2007-11-15 16:27:44 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous

I love to write, but for some odd reason I need to write poetry. How do I do that?

2007-11-15 15:00:13 · 7 answers · asked by Lissa E 1

2007-11-15 14:50:04 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous

with new knowledge comes new fear
the danger of which we hold dear
fire burns and my brain bubbles
a recipe for trouble

now that I'm awake
everything is fake
the terrors start
and I tear apart

long lies are revealed
a crack in my shield
paradise lost
now filled with exhaust

This one is about the eiphany I had when I first found goth, emo, ect. I felt smarter and I had a better understanding of the world, but it was a negitive understanding.

2007-11-15 14:15:15 · 3 answers · asked by toastalchemist 3

i have to write a poem for school.. if i struggle i can do a "me" poem..
but those are for like 5th graders and im in eight grade.
i really wana write a touching poem
any help?

2007-11-15 14:09:22 · 4 answers · asked by Sareena 1

She was born, barely survived...but never really.....

"i am all alone tonight...
my heart is aching
restless is my head
half the world is sleeping
the other half is dead.
all of them are resting
who will tuck me in bed? " ..

2007-11-15 13:58:44 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous

Don't you just love poems? I know it's a little early but do you know of any good poems for holidays like Christmas and Valentines? Thanks! I am open to comment please no rude ones please. Thank you for your answer!!!

2007-11-15 13:45:51 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous

I had to write a poem about an animal to a friend in my Pre-AP class.

I need help because I don't think I used the right punctuation and capitalization and my stanzas might not even be in the right format so if you could just look over it and give me your opinion about it that would be helpful! :)


Dinosaur Poem


Our laughter fills the air due to this image of an important animal in which we share.

A friendship such as this comes once in a lifetime since it is so rare.

Dinosaurs, they fill us with excitement and glee;

So simple and childish these silly jokes, yet to you and me they mean more than anyone could ever see.

Through these creatures I am reminded of you.

Something used to make me happy and incapable of feeling blue.

I love my best always and forever until the end,

Taylor we will be inseparable friends!

2007-11-15 13:27:52 · 3 answers · asked by Danielle (: 3

This Morning
Written By Semper Fi Reborn

This morning,
She didn't wait for me,
To come to the kitchen before she poured me a glass,
Of smiles.
Accompanied by a plate of her sexiness,
And toasted loveliness.
I couldn't eat another bite.
So this morning I whistled,
As I drove to work.
But I left my brain in park.
My heart was in four wheel drive.
I didn't want my heart to slide into the intersection,
And splatter anyone with my private joy.
That would have ruined this morning.

2007-11-15 12:05:04 · 13 answers · asked by Semp-listic! 7

Can anyone find me a poem with alliteration in it by a famous poet? Please indicate which line contains the alliteration.

Thank You.

2007-11-15 11:05:51 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous

"the dark barrier called fear may be high and imposing, but it is often exceedingly thin."

2007-11-15 10:37:59 · 1 answers · asked by tom_sexey 1

can u help me out ...kinda confused

2007-11-15 07:56:33 · 2 answers · asked by mya 2

For love has given for love has been taken my love has broken me in two the one that hopes my love will come back to me but part of me is bitter. Bitterness fells so good but how long can it last without the end. The end needs to come to come quickly life should have ended a long time a go when she broke me why couldn’t the blade have cut deeper why am I still here would a bullet have finished the job. I have found the end but?

2007-11-15 04:44:29 · 3 answers · asked by Johnathan 1

Next semester, I'm going to take a Creative Writing class and I'm worried that I won't be able to produce a piece of creative writing on command. Does anyone have any advice to help me overcome this fear?

2007-11-15 03:57:00 · 13 answers · asked by Cinnibuns 5