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with new knowledge comes new fear
the danger of which we hold dear
fire burns and my brain bubbles
a recipe for trouble

now that I'm awake
everything is fake
the terrors start
and I tear apart

long lies are revealed
a crack in my shield
paradise lost
now filled with exhaust

This one is about the eiphany I had when I first found goth, emo, ect. I felt smarter and I had a better understanding of the world, but it was a negitive understanding.

2007-11-15 14:15:15 · 3 answers · asked by toastalchemist 3 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

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Infact I'd say it was a positive understanding since daily, we individually experience this but dare not reveal:

now that I'm awake
everything is fake
the terrors start
and I tear apart


smart imagination in my view.

2007-11-15 16:47:19 · answer #1 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0 0

Vary nice I can't wait til I can read the rest

2007-11-22 04:47:54 · answer #2 · answered by Joe 2 · 0 0

That was so real and true.U have a gift n poetry.
I would luv 2 hear more.=)

2007-11-16 03:52:25 · answer #3 · answered by anime1net 5 · 0 0

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