To be dead
empty...void......night after night
day after day...darkness...fright...
a living carcass, restless...pointless
Blinded, scarred...falling wingless
a troubled soul...damned in hell
fathomless purgatory of the unwell
screaming..fading...tormented
bleeding..waiting...dead
2007-11-16 21:28:18 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
You keep inventing poetic devices! I've never read a poem composed basically of single words and I've read (and written) a lot of poetry. Many people who answer your questions give you advice rather than comments on your poetry. So, I'll do it this one time. If you want to write poetry of angst, it's fine; it's your style. Now, edit them, put them together and send them to a publisher!
2007-11-16 23:38:45 · answer #1 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
What are you talking about person whomever you are with the four little squares under your Avatar?
this seems in reference to another poem I just read of yours.
Of course, I could be and probably am wrong, wrong, wrong.
Thanks for giving some insight, and of course, I could be wrong about the insight...
2007-11-17 08:06:31 · answer #2 · answered by Poetry 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes, but it depends on the person's point of view, how he or she understands and interpret the words they read.
2007-11-17 06:30:07 · answer #3 · answered by ontan 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very depressing but I guess that's the point. Great words and imagery. Keep it up.
2007-11-17 05:39:41 · answer #4 · answered by 'Mojo' 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I cannot it's fakking Szepspir Englaidh
2007-11-17 05:30:57 · answer #5 · answered by ケチャッパー 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes i can read or else i would not be able to answer, are you depressed or do you like dramatic poetry.
2007-11-18 02:12:51 · answer #6 · answered by noone 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Aah!! All these words define my heart,,,,more words i would like to add is "
vengenance, ruthless, sarcastic thoughts
tearing apart my brain
in innumberable sequels,
within the destiny of unknown plight..
So go on,,,go on,,,till u realise u r dead..."..........
2007-11-17 05:39:42 · answer #7 · answered by I M Stoned 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Yes i can read! It means about death suffering etc.
2007-11-17 05:33:44 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good, just one word for it "HELL". that what this is. someone being twisted and torn.
2007-11-17 12:42:54 · answer #9 · answered by Can't Stop Smiling 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i'm hoping death really isn't that bad. i imagined a whole different picture.
2007-11-17 16:51:14 · answer #10 · answered by Mary S 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋