[edited tis poem a bit]
[13 and crap at poetry]
[but needed to get some feelins/memories out]
[so don't care if its crap]
[your opinions/comments please?]
Feel something.
In dim light its near.
Be brave, keep on walking.
Should have run.
Icy hand grips arm.
Pulled deep into the woods.
Try to scream.
But the words don’t come.
Being hit to the ground.
I eventually shout.
He down tight
Can barely move filled with fright.
It finally stops.
I get up and run.
Out the woods on the road.
I stumble but.
I pick myself up.
The path seems much longer.
Reach destination.
The time has passed
Safe now but still bleeding.
A memory.
A pain to last forever.
Will never have my innocence back.
2007-11-17 01:21:21 · 4 answers · asked by Gerard W 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
it should be
I eventually shout
*he holds me down tight
can barely move filled with fright
2007-11-17 01:36:00 · update #1
ooh snap, thats a pretty good poem...however, you hsould perhaps specify what ur talking about...bt i'd give it 10 on mystery!!
2007-11-17 02:30:13 · answer #1 · answered by ~*Natasha*~ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-17 01:57:05 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
GW. it's good effort but I'd advise that you attempt lighter topics and themes than these scary scares about bleeding, dim light, and
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He down tight
Can barely move filled with fright.
2007-11-17 02:48:53 · answer #3 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's gooed
2007-11-17 01:26:19 · answer #4 · answered by ang 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋