Read again
why do i keep going over my poems
i've read them all before
still i keep reading and re reading
it 's like viewing myself in a mirror
crashing...shattering...
it 's like seeing my own blood
seeping...trickling...gushing
it's like feeling all my pain
over and over again...and again, , ,
2007-11-16 21:26:53 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
No, Ig, it's not a bunch of crap. To me, and I do re-read my poetry. It's like taking a journey of what you have written. All it's twists and turns.
I will re-read poems I have written and go "Ah!", that's part of my journey, I did write it down!"
Good, bad, or even indifferent, it is so much better to write it down, re-read it and see it how it has taken you. What better way to do this than the expression of poetry?
2007-11-17 00:18:18 · answer #1 · answered by Poetry 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
All great writers review their work many times, despite the pain it may cause. You are at the threshold of ability to achieve greatness. Once again, the imagery in this poem is startling and intense, especially the image of viewing yourself in a mirror. Your work mirrors your pain in words, but those words also create images in the mind--a mirror of the soul of the writer. For a start, create a title for your future collection of poetry and work from there.
2007-11-17 07:46:59 · answer #2 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
No, I think it's pretty good. Alot of emotion, Keep it up and never doubt yourself. Great poem!
2007-11-17 05:33:31 · answer #3 · answered by 'Mojo' 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it its very visual and emotional.
Do you only write poems or have you ever written a song?
2007-11-17 11:37:41 · answer #4 · answered by KD 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes, finally it's about relating to other people's poems, with what is expressed in them...
2007-11-17 09:26:47 · answer #5 · answered by Analyst 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
If one wants different results, they do not get them by doing
the same thing over and over again. good luck
2007-11-17 09:54:23 · answer #6 · answered by jenny 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Pretty Average. Not really all that good.
I dont appreciate mediocrity in tones above than what it deserves.
TW K
2007-11-17 10:53:16 · answer #7 · answered by TW K 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
You have potencial. But this is the opinion of a person who does not know much about poetry.
2007-11-17 05:34:26 · answer #8 · answered by Luís Santos 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's not for you to prejudge, or us to evaluate, your poems today.
It's tomorrow which will judge them whether they have passed into literature.
2007-11-17 09:33:06 · answer #9 · answered by Lance 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
ha ha lolz,,,, u seem to be writing your heart,,,,,,,,,,surely if seen from the poetic view,,its a bunch of crap,,, but yeah the lines bleed through your heart,,,
2007-11-17 05:50:05 · answer #10 · answered by I M Stoned 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋