This Morning
Written By Semper Fi Reborn
This morning,
She didn't wait for me,
To come to the kitchen before she poured me a glass,
Of smiles.
Accompanied by a plate of her sexiness,
And toasted loveliness.
I couldn't eat another bite.
So this morning I whistled,
As I drove to work.
But I left my brain in park.
My heart was in four wheel drive.
I didn't want my heart to slide into the intersection,
And splatter anyone with my private joy.
That would have ruined this morning.
2007-11-15 12:05:04 · 13 answers · asked by Semp-listic! 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I seen this poem starred and knew it had to be one of yours :o)
I hope you have the same for breakfast tomorrow
((((Semper)))))
2007-11-15 12:10:54 · answer #1 · answered by ☮ Pangel ☮ 7 · 4⤊ 1⤋
The bottom line is that if you're not asking and answering questions then you don't belong on Yahoo Answers. A lot of people mistakenly think that this forum is for whatever you want. Its not a poetry reviewing site and its not a place to just hang out with your friends. Sorry if you have been misled but thats why. P.S. - Ang has got it right and typically she has a lot of thumbs down just for being right - I bet I will get thumbs down too. It just shows how much people misunderstand this site.
2016-04-04 03:31:56 · answer #2 · answered by Beverly 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice job! It's bright, light and quite uplifting. Why? I think it's because you are so unabashed about expressing your happy situation to the whole world. For the young ones, it paints a kind of ideal thing and gives hope that such a life comes soon to them. For older ones, it triggers recollections of those pleasant times when all was well in their own youthful worlds. You are thoughtful in sharing such cutely chosen words.
2007-11-15 13:44:17 · answer #3 · answered by Madmunk 6 · 3⤊ 1⤋
Awww, the mystery of poetry... a thinly veiled attempt to convey intimacy. No wonder you were whistling!
2007-11-15 23:43:13 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Great. I love the extended image "plate of sexiness" "toasted lovliness." A guy poem--and I think those are hard to do this well.
2007-11-15 12:52:59 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 1⤋
thats really good, so sweet!!!! who has you in such a lovely mood, who inspired this cute poem? she must be wonderful!!!
2007-11-16 00:41:20 · answer #6 · answered by ? 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
there you go, splattering your private joy, all over the Internet.
thanks for the splatter, you made me smile.
2007-11-15 12:38:58 · answer #7 · answered by Hannah's Grandpa 7 · 4⤊ 1⤋
I really like this one. You must have a good woman, my friend.
2007-11-15 12:09:32 · answer #8 · answered by Patrick the Carpathian, CaFO 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Lovely!! :)
Thank you for sharing it, friend :)
2007-11-15 12:09:20 · answer #9 · answered by Moon :) 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋
how sweet!
2007-11-16 05:23:06 · answer #10 · answered by * 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋