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----My rhyme scheme is abba abba cdcdee---
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The brilliant colors which runs through my life,
Plus obstacles that make me really fret,
Makes me reflect, should I thank or regret?
What God has given me, be it a strife.
Dearest God, in my life, You made a knife,
In my stormy journey, I ought to get
Peace, serenity, but these can't be set,
For You made me a challenge, ?????
Rocks and stones do not grind me into dust
It polishes and turns me to a gem
The years I've lived, I did my best, it is a must
To show gratitude to God, unlike them.
That one day, I'll sparkle, it is God's plan
I already know, for I am a man.
by: Daryl Jay Eborda, Cebu City, Philippines
-----Please edit the last line on the second stanza. Also, the I admit my sonnet's really ugly...So kindly edit some parts for me...------
2007-12-01
22:39:35
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