a 2 line poem....based on fact.?

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insults only injure
,,,,the giver.

D.

2007-12-02 05:10:59 · 4 answers · asked by dorian 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry

to many commas,i know.
just trying to create a bit of space,so the reader can think,
D,

2007-12-02 09:53:55 · update #1

Very nice. Lots of power, for five words and some commas. A star attraction!

2007-12-02 09:27:25 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋

You came in the name of peace..
and leave the names of the deceased.
The Iraq War

2007-12-02 13:19:24 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋

Hatred hurts the hater,
They'll be punished -- later.

2007-12-02 15:14:05 · answer #3 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋

alexandria-I liked it

Dorian-I dunno...

2007-12-02 14:14:18 · answer #4 · answered by kittenlova 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋