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Direction
Why…fight it
You will never, never, never
…Not deny it
With quiet, and
Subtle innuendo
Buy it
Cry…lying
You’ll forever, ever, ever
…Sit beside it
Light lit, or
Self illumination
Equipped
Goodbye...fly it
In clever, clever, clever
…Reliance
With compass, no
Indication
Try it
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2007-12-01 23:58:14 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Do you hear which song I 'borrowed' this from?
"If you're going to steal, steal from the best." Bob Hope.
2007-12-02 01:39:39 · update #1
I like all. I always enjoy the visual presentation too of your poems. The form itself makes a melody.
2007-12-02 03:58:23 · answer #1 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I love the rhyme and meter--you may have invented a new form.
2007-12-02 08:43:43 · answer #2 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I do like it a lot. It's a great form. I am all for simplicity.
2007-12-02 09:35:49 · answer #3 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I really, really like how it rhymes. Very neat in form and style! =)
2007-12-02 08:25:17 · answer #4 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋