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‘Carry me aloft on gossamer wings’
Sings like an old folk song
You don’t belong
In the modern day
Playing cards for less than money
In a hollowed out hole
Back alley
‘Golden ring upon your finger’
Forget it, it’s you who lingers
In a past
You never lived
Along some river in your mind
Long run dry
‘On your knees and pray to God’
Has only begot the I.E.D.
On parched desert sand
The Oasis
In your imagination’s eye
A mirage
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2007-12-01 23:54:17 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
LOL! This was the last one, from about 2AM. I like it, but I am partial to them when they're babies...
2007-12-02 01:10:27 · update #1
Sorry! Maybe you should have gone to sleep a bit earlier on this one. You don't make your point and it seems to me more of an hallucination than a message.
2007-12-02 00:39:22 · answer #1 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
give it up man
2007-12-01 23:57:16 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
it doesn't make sense!
2007-12-02 00:10:56 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋