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May the ring
Upon your finger
Be much more
Than gold to you
And the diamond
That you gave her
Reflecting what
A man must do
Hold her hand
In the darkness
Sheltered heart
From the pain
Say I love you
My forever
Listen to her
Be a friend
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2007-12-01 23:55:24 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Nice, sweet. I actually stumbled on "My forever", and I really like it.
Moonbelle and Steve, I am really sorry, but this poem is dedicated to me!
2007-12-02 02:06:43 · answer #1 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Very nice TD, very nice. You continue to impress me with your writing skills.
Sorry Moonbelle, TD wrote that about the long time love affair I have with one of my hands. Hey, different strokes for different folks.
More to pity though.
2007-12-02 00:06:21 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 6⤊ 0⤋
Now, THAT's more like it!! This one's a classic; the iambic pentameter follows the human heartbeat, whether it's Poe's dark poetry or yours filled with light. Congratulations!
2007-12-02 00:42:01 · answer #3 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋
You bring a tear to my eye and a comfort to my heart!
2007-12-02 01:45:57 · answer #4 · answered by Reenie: Mom of Marine 6 · 4⤊ 0⤋
A very very good poem.Just love it.Awesome
2007-12-02 00:11:04 · answer #5 · answered by Neethu 3 · 4⤊ 0⤋
I don't just like it, i love it TD! Is this dedicated for me and my Russian boyfriend? hee-hee...
2007-12-02 00:01:01 · answer #6 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 5⤊ 0⤋
It's love ly.
2007-12-02 04:00:34 · answer #7 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
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