Her
Written By Semper Fi Reborn and The Dark Prince
Semper:
Look at her,
She is everything I ever imagined,
Standing before me.
Like a statuette of grace.
And on her face is the smirk,
I am hypnotized by.
Oh man, I love to be around,
Her.
The Dark Prince:
She treats me like a possession,
To do with as she will
I feel like I'm lost in her,
Yet I love her still.
I am at her beck and call
Still I don't complain
I treat her like a modern queen
But it's always just in vain.
Semper:
Someone open a window,
Lest I pass out.
All that I have inhaled,
Is her scent.
My nostrils recieve their blessing.
Yet in still,
I..
Can't..
Breathe..
I love her.
Maybe too much.
2007-12-02 10:25:31 · 11 answers · asked by Semp-listic! 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Dark Prince, we could do this everyday if you like! LOL!
2007-12-02 10:37:36 · update #1
LOL I really enjoyed this, lets do it again.
2007-12-02 10:33:32 · answer #1 · answered by The Dark Prince 3 · 3⤊ 2⤋
Interesting juxtaposition of styles, with the common dark theme....what females in your two lives have inspired such thoughts???
A poetic asphyxiation of romance, yes; I like it.
2007-12-02 12:49:27 · answer #2 · answered by Jack B, goodbye, Yahoo! 6 · 3⤊ 1⤋
Dark Prince should have wrote most of it. Never thought I'd be saying that.
2007-12-02 15:19:47 · answer #3 · answered by Chara Pointshot 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I think it's a sign of the end-times.
J/K
It was good guys.
2007-12-02 11:08:03 · answer #4 · answered by Todd 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
AWESOME!!!!! What time shall we meet tomorrow? What was that saying about brilliant minds think alike?
2007-12-02 10:53:50 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
Fantastic!! I love it. Nice job.
2007-12-02 10:30:40 · answer #6 · answered by . 5 · 2⤊ 1⤋
you guys are on a roll. This is some good stuff:)
2007-12-02 14:01:44 · answer #7 · answered by Maria 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
awesomeness that is so amazing maybe you two should team up and you could get your poems published
2007-12-02 16:12:29 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
At least the worst of the two awfuls only wrote one third.
2007-12-02 12:19:48 · answer #9 · answered by Harry Lillis 2 · 0⤊ 4⤋
good job
2007-12-02 10:36:32 · answer #10 · answered by ? 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋