...and one re-run. Do you like this poem?

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...and one re-run. Do you like this poem?

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Afternoon Storm

Rain drops, a voice
Blue Clouds, a song
Torrent, a chorus
And Thunder, the drums
Matinee Showcase
By the window, it’s warm
Play me another, Afternoon Storm

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2007-12-02 00:00:02 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry

This one is old...1993.

2007-12-02 01:42:22 · update #1

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In your other poems, you paint a canvas with words. In this one, you write a symphony. Your talent amazes me.

2007-12-02 00:45:22 · answer #1 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋

outside raining
inside paining

in between

just being.

2007-12-02 08:30:38 · answer #2 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋

Slow start, great finish.

2007-12-02 08:09:59 · answer #3 · answered by SteveX 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋