[♥]Can I have a lot of answers plzz!!!?
*I'm 14
*I have BAD writer's block when a topic is thrown @ me.
*I hate poetry sometimes, especially when I have to write it.
*I had to do an ode peom...topic is the 'beach'.
*I know it kinda sucks, so you don't have to tell me LOL...just say what I should change and if you thinks it's okay.
Ode to the Beach
Sand
Seashells
Jellyfish
Shore
Water
Seagulls
Sun
Sandcastles
Ocean
Fish
The water hits the shore
As the seagulls fly overhead
The sand covers the ground
Like a broad bedspread
On the sand, seashells sprawl
With the jellyfish that were swept
By the waves, out of the ocean
Where they once slept.
The sun sits above the water
Like a big yellow sphere
It warms the beachgoers
And the boardwalk that stands near.
The peerless sandcastles
And the appealing palm trees
The myriad fish in the sea,
This is why I adore the beach.
2007-08-13
17:27:06
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