i need one about a guy his names brett and hes 16 please can you give me one i know i should write on but im not good at it so if someone good please give me one with the name brett or something in it thanks.:]
2007-08-13 17:39:28 · 8 answers · asked by EricaEcstasy 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Why a poem? Guys are not into them as much as girls. Unless you want to be cryptic. We don't like having to work things out. We are not as romantic as girls, especially at 16. Just write him a letter saying how you feel about him.
For days I wondered what to write
For days I stayed up late at night
Just thinking what I can write for you
Just to say how much I adore you
Brett, I don't know if feel the same way
But there so many things I want to say
Everything has changed since you came along
And I don't care anymore if I'm right or wrong
Brett, just as long as you know how I feel
And that my love for you will always be real
I look forward to everyday since I meet you
It's like finally all my dreams have come true
I could write about the stars, moon and sea
But nothing, no-one has made me feel as happy
Brett, I hope you feel the same way too
I love you...
2007-08-13 17:52:24 · answer #1 · answered by B T 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Your name is Brett so I won't forget.
I see you from a mile and you make me smile,
I feel weak then I can't speak,
your all I ever desire.
Will you see the deepest of my sea,
It is you that makes my heart sink.
My long nights are far from your sight,
wishing to be side by side.
Brett don't forget it is you that makes me smile.
Love from the deepest of my heart.
2007-08-13 18:20:50 · answer #2 · answered by amores 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Whenever you're away
I whisper your name
My soul gets
Lost inside your eyes
Somewhere deep inside
I find you there
My heart never known '
This kind of amourous thing
Brett I think about what you mean to me
And I understand whats happening
Underneath it all
You get me in the zone
Whereever you are
Is where I belong
Cause baby with you i'm home
wrote this on the spot hope u like it...:)
2007-08-13 17:53:28 · answer #3 · answered by mistista07 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
o my brett, you're such a hung stud
please suck on my poem, even tho it's crud
cuz i don't care enough to write it myself
cuz um... i really have a crush on another elf
2007-08-13 17:49:19 · answer #4 · answered by let me feel kinda wonderful! 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Brett
Are your ways so set
They form a net
So you cannot let
Love be, without regret
Do not over think, fret
Let's, rather, be glad we met.
2007-08-13 17:48:08 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
ev'ry BRETT you take
ev'ry move you make
ev'ry vow you break
ev'ry step you take
i'll be watchin' you!
2007-08-13 17:57:23 · answer #6 · answered by Rey 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
the grand times we have spent
standing hand in hand...
With you my darling brett
is a time that will be held by the angels...
uhhh, I have no idea if that was good or not, but whatever!
2007-08-13 17:44:52 · answer #7 · answered by Jay P 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Thanks bret
for always being there for me
thanks bret
for leting me see
how great love can be
thanks bret
for all the love you give me
and thanks again for always being there for me
(I know its not that good).
well, good luck
2007-08-13 18:16:32 · answer #8 · answered by SOCCER GIRL! 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋